Getting any better?

[Assassin Xaero]

I don't think that one is very good...




Are they getting any better? Still don't get how to add depth/flow into them...

[.kNiGhTz.]

Blend them in a little better, get a controlled composition, not one that looks hectic and everywhere. Lighting needs to be realistic, so add shadows light and dark spots, and add contrast for atmosphere. Best way to get flow is to choose a stock that has a direction out of the canvas for example pointing out or something, then add some flowing objects or effects within it. To create depth, create perspective, small things in bg, big things in foreground. Usually people blur but meh, not that great, If you need any advice just ask me, im usually around for alittle.

[sk8boy175]

sorry but its not getting dramatically better..its slow but getting better
the first one is pretty flat..the lighting is bad..tone it down a bit..the render seems a bit LQ (low quality)
second actually has better depth..but it still needs work..as well as flow..the double focal isnt good...so scrap the left side..keep the right side..bring it more centered
keep going mate..u will get there

[[Thomas]]

First one looks like a working progress IMO.

Second needs a bit more work. But a big improvement.

[Assassin Xaero]

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on them some more...

[Exaphilate]

Try not to leave your work so montone, after a while it gets dull and unimpressionable. The effects on some of your tags are somewhat decent, but not very relevant if that makes sense. I mean they arent fitting. Anyways, you pick nice renders / stocks so take advantage of them. Btw Second one is not bad.