not to sure about this one

[JDubbya]

whatchu people think?

oh yeah there are 2 light sources in the stock
so thats why there are 2 of them

[Kura]

I don't mind it actually. You could have erased the C4D over the focal, but it's not too bad.
The border is too thick, but good job!

[Semi_Fiction]

This is one of your best pieces that I've seen recently.GJ J

[JDubbya]

thanks bros

[sk8boy175]

Yea i agree with Semi..only complaint is to dodge/burn more of the render for shadowing and such..seein as how there r two light sources..
great job

[[Thomas]]

Personally I think it is one of your best. Fixed up the blending and such, but great job!

[Exaphilate]

See that blue circled part of the pen tool, where its going over the c4d , lower the opacity, just in that certain spot (lower the erasers opacity) of the pen tool, because it looks ugly going over, and if you lower the opacity it will look like its going behind, and it will also show the transparency of the c4d, making this sig pwnage :D

[JDubbya]

Originally Posted by Exaphilate

See that blue circled part of the pen tool, where its going over the c4d , lower the opacity, just in that certain spot (lower the erasers opacity) of the pen tool, because it looks ugly going over, and if you lower the opacity it will look like its going behind, and it will also show the transparency of the c4d, making this sig pwnage :D

done

[penqz]

Agree with the others. Nice done with the spiral I really like the effects. What i dont like is the border. But its my taste but anyway overall it looks great